Cake Alarms Firefighters
A 95-YEAR OLD WOMAN'S BIRTHDAY PARTY WAS INVADED BY FIREFIGHTERS YESTERDAY.
ONE MABEL MCCULLOUGH WAS CELEBRATING HER BIRTHDAY PARTY WITH SOME FRIENDS FROM CHURCH. WHEN SHE BLEW OUT ALL OF THE 95 CANDLES ON HER CAKE IT CREATED A CLOUD OF SMOKE. MCCOLLOUGH AND HER GUESTS DIDN'T REALIZE THAT THE SMOKE HAD SET OFF THE BUILDING'S FIRE ALARM. EVERYONE RECEIVED QUITE A SHOCK WHEN 24 FIREFIGHTERS ARRIVED AT THE DOOR MINUTES LATER LOOKING FOR A FIRE TO FIGHT!

I'd make the opening a little softer (and make it today, not yesterday).
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